Friday, December 12, 2008

short story

As I was constructing my short story for creative writing class I encountered some difficulties. One difficulty that I encountered was coming up with dialogue for the story with the characters that I had in my story. Creating dialogue was hard because I couldn't come up with things to say to carry on a conversation with some of the characters in the story. Another difficulty I encountered was ending the story, because then ending of the story was real hard to end and it had to be a certain amount of pages so you couldn't just keep going on with the story, so that was hard for be. But the beginning of the story was real easy to start, and the middle got a little bit harder, and then the end was just the hardest.

Friday, November 14, 2008

The quote that I live by is "Hard work beats talent when talent doesn't work hard" I have been living by that quote since I was a little kid. This quote means that if there is somone that doesn't work because they all ready have all the talent he will not get any better but if someone who works on there game they will eventually catch up in ability and be better then they are because they have been working and the other person has not. I also like this quote because not many people know this quote and it is the truth.

Thursday, November 6, 2008

Sense poem

Mall

I see a bunch of stores compact into one big building.

It tastes like money

It smells like food in the food court.

It sounds like cash resgisters.

it feels like christmas.

Mall
I am
Life, Strenght, Giving
I care about other people just as I care about myself.
Perserverence is important to me.
Honesty is important to me.
Hard-Working is important to me.
Friendship is important to me.
Waking up is bad, but going to school is good, so you can get an education.
Some countries in the world are getting weaker, some countries are getting stronger.
Alot of negative people are in this world
I am

Just Because

Just because I'm not tall.

At least I don't trip and fall.

It's alot better when i walk through the mall.

That is why i like being short.
What is the opposite of low.

It's as high as you can go.

My bike sits so low to the ground.

Hopefully I don't flip upside down.
Can you imagine...

Beanie Wells not being able to play.
Art class with no clay.
A day with no sun.
A child's day with no fun.
School with no work.
Eating with no fork.
Not wearing any shoes.
Playing sports and you could never lose.